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A fact from Political history of the Philippines appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 1 November 2021 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
I can take a look at this! Please be somewhat patient with me, as it is a long article, but I promise I'll be as thorough and quick as I can! — GhostRiver21:16, 12 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"and was adopted on February 1" → "and was adopted the next day"
Comma after "and vice president"
All the existing parties to merge into the KALIBAPI, created by Proclamation No. 109 on December 8, 1942, with other parties being banned. Confusing syntax
KALIBAPI is double-linked in the penultimate paragraph
Sentence should either end here, or there should be a colon rather than a comma: Political reform movements that had grown under Marcos and played a significant role in the revolution lost their strength over the next few years,
"did not with to run for election again" → "did not wish to run for re-election"
"Ramos had to face an ongoing energy crisis that had started during the Aquino administration which was resolved when Ramos issued contracts favorable to power producers." → "Ramos, facing an ongoing energy crisis from the Aquino administration, resolved the issue by issuring contracts favorable to power producers."
"following Estrada being officially charged with "plundering", Estrada's supporters" → "after Estrada was officially charged with "plundering", his supporters"
However, former president Aquino died, and her son, Benigno Aquino III, overtook Villar in the polls. This sentence comes out of nowhere a little, as the influence of Aquino's death is not immediately clear in the context of Teodoro vs. Villar
There are two: places where headlines should be changed to title case per MOS:ALLCAPS – I'm looking at [19] (A SINGULAR AND A PLURAL FOLK) and 37 (GENERAL AMNESTY FOR THE FILIPINOS)
This might be a pain in the ass, but establishing a consistent date formatting style would be nice; some are YYYY-MM-DD, some are MDY, and some are DMY
Thank you for making those edits, particularly the one about Aquino's son! Knowing that he launched his campaign after his mother's death really puts in an additional piece of clarification. Happy to pass! — GhostRiver15:12, 14 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]