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"The idea for Lodoss War: Deedlit in Wonder Labyrinth came up when Playism was approached by an editor of the eponymous novels and review the source material." - What do you mean by "and review the source material" here? It doesn't make grammatical or logical sense.
"Unique to the game are the elemental spirits; During gameplay, the player locates the wind spirit Sylph and the fire spirit Salamander, each one possessing different attributes that alters Deedlit's abilities, and swap between the two.[2][4][5]" - I'd remove the "Unique to the game" bit, it sounds too much like marketing fluff.
"While one elemental spirit can be used, the unused spirit can be leveled up three times by absorbing "Soul Screamers" dropped by enemies, but they can be leveled down if Deedlit gets hit." - I get the point of the sentence, but it's very clunky to read.
"...which led them to reviewing the source material and decided to go with the idea after seeing that both the material and Team Ladybug's artwork went together.[7]" - decided to, or deciding to?
The second, third and fourth sentences are pretty fragmented and all use the same reference. Couldn't this be compacted into a couple of sentences using one reference?
Not a whole lot here, except that it's got quite bulky paragraphs. Maybe split the larger one up? It's also got a big problem of run-on sentences peppered with commas. Rewriting to be section/subject based is a tall order, but that may be the easiest solution to this.