Talk:S'well

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I agree with Smartse, the page was worded pretty promotionally from the get go. But I think cutting it down to eight sentences without reworking the actual press is a little much. I combed through the references and they get a fair amount of news in publications including Fortune, Bloomberg, CNN etc. I had added a pop culture section a little while ago after coming across an article that associated the product more as a big trend with a notable following of celebrities etc., but I can see how that'd be promotional too. Adding back neutral facts S3venevan (talk) 13:06, 28 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I revised the information a little in a userspace here, not much could be added back due its promotional nature S3venevan (talk) 15:39, 28 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]