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Accepting this review! Since I am exceptionally jobless right now, I imagine I will have this completed before the weekend ends.--NØ04:26, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"Swift and Jack Antonoff wrote and produced the song, which features background vocals and instruments from the American band the Dixie Chicks." - This is giving the impression that the Dixie Chicks are not credited as featured artists since background vocals are usually uncredited, so I would just go with "Swift and Jack Antonoff wrote and produced the song, which features the American band the Dixie Chicks." or move a mention of them being featured artists into the first sentence of the lead.
Since "certification" is piped to Gold certification, you could include gold in the wikilink
The ARIA abbreviation is not needed in the lead since it is not reused
"The album was influenced by the connections she felt with her fans on her Reputation Stadium Tour" - "The album was influenced by the connections she felt with her fans on the Reputation Stadium Tour"
"she ended her previous contract with Big Machine" - It probably wasn't her unilateral decision so maybe "when her previous contract with Big Machine ended"
"The Dixie Chicks taught me that you can have a strong female voice, saying whatever she wants in music, and experimenting with having a very feminine aesthetic, but very tough resilience to them." - This could be paraphrased since there are also a bunch of other quotes surrounding it
"The Irish Times's Louise Bruton thought that the track captured "the fear and the silence of a hospital room". - Is this better suited in the composition section since it seems to concern the lyrics' imagery rather than a subjective opinion?
There is an abundance of quotes in the Critical reception section. I consider these acceptable on the GA level so paraphrasing some of these is optional to you.
I don't think people would know what OCC stands for.
Is the Gaga curated thing noteworthy? Her involvement does not seem to have been integral to why the event was notable.
What is the reliability of the Radio Times? Just my first time encountering this, lol.
Hi @MaranoFan: thanks for reviewing. I've addressed all points accordingly. Re. Radio Times it is published by the same company that publishes several BBC outlets so I think it's of high quality :) Agreed that this is such a good song but also a very heartbreaking one so it makes sense she only performed it once... Ippantekina (talk) 08:52, 4 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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