Talk:The "P" (Cal Poly San Luis Obispo)

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Use Poly Mountain, not hill

provide citations (footnotes) within text to source in references of each piece of information

Link mentions of Cal Poly to Wikipedia entry on Cal Poly

Very good overall, but I need to see specific links to determine appropriateness of paraphrase from source material

There's a conspicuous absence of non-cal poly sources. Try at least for a newspaper story. Other sources are books in the archives about the history of cal poly.

Rudolph2007 (talk) 22:58, 13 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

no changes since previous comments were added. This entry is still 450 words short of required length. Research and organization are good so far, but...

C- Rudolph2007 (talk) 15:59, 16 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I've made some edits to clean up the prose, but three issues remain

The sources of the indented quotes need to be cited. The original photo has been removed because you havent filled out the proper form. Footnote 8 is wrongly placed and nothing refers to it.

If these are corrected grade changed to B. As is, C+ Rudolph2007 (talk) 16:56, 1 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]