Talk:Zari (song)

Zari (song) is currently a Songs good article nominee. Nominated by Cheers, mate! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) at 04:57, 19 June 2024 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria and will decide whether or not to list it as a good article. Comments are welcome from any editor who has not nominated or contributed significantly to this article. This review will be closed by the first reviewer. To add comments to this review, click discuss review and edit the page. Short description: 2024 song by Marina Satti

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Nominator: Nascar9919 (talk · contribs) 04:57, 19 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:58, 27 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a. (reference section):

   b. (citations to reliable sources):

   c. (OR):

   d. (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a. (major aspects):

   b. (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

   b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

I'll get on with this today! --K. Peake 17:58, 27 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

• Ref is not needed when the songwriters are sourced in the prose
• Replace hlist with bullet points per Template:Infobox song
• WP:OVERLINK of Marina Satti under composers
• Mention in the opening sentence it is from her her debut extended play, P.O.P. (2024)
• "It was co-written by" → "The song was co-written by" and shouldn't you mention how many producers there was too?
• "and released on" → "It was released on" as a new sentence and change to simply reading "from the EP" as this should have already been introduced earlier on
• "It represented Greece" → "The song represented Greece" since you use "it" later in the sentence anyway
• Add a sentence at the end of the first paragraph mentioning how the song was created from selecting a few snippets from the 200 submissions
• "to tell the "real characteristics"" – the quote is not sourced at all, so re-word to something like "to against the stereotypes" per the body
• "The song was met with a" → "The song received a"
• "it peaked within the top ten" → "the song peaked within the top 10" per MOS:NUM

• Add a second sentence sourcing the producers because there are the infobox but not written out at all in the body as they should be
• The quote has too much overlap with the usage of felt in prose; cut down to "because she "felt readier now"." per MOS:QUOTE
• Wiwibloggs should not be italicised
• "with the die" → "with the refrain"

• "an accompanying music video was" → "a music video was" with the wikilink
• "an Australian tourist[14] while" → "an Australian tourist,[14] while"
• "with the tourist presented in the video representing" → "with the tourist presented representing"
• "stating that "my dream" → "expressing "my dream"
• I do not think Overthinking It is a reliable source – appears this is a fiction podcast from their website

• I think the first quote can be re-worded after the "didn't send a song" part to mention something like how it lacked clear rhythms and a trap genre or any other genre
• Put Dimitris Rigopoulos' quote into your own words from "something that they seem" onwards
• Not sure about Matt Wrather usage since he is from Overthinking It

• Wiwibloggs should not be italicised or linked
• "rated the song tenth out" → "rated the song 10th out" per MOS:NUM, although this is the 11th place unless I'm missing something here?
• "this year" but also" → "this year", but also"
• "in some cases."" → "in some cases"." per MOS:QUOTE
• Second para soon!