- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 05:52, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
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Alfred Kroeber: A Personal Configuration
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that Theodora Kroeber's biography of her husband was described by anthropologist David G. Mandelbaum as being as important from an anthropological perspective as Ishi in Two Worlds?- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/KVUE (California)
- Comment: Having a little trouble coming up with a punchy hook, likely because I've been staring at the sources all day. Suggestions are welcome.
Moved to mainspace by Vanamonde93 (talk). Self-nominated at 04:02, 31 October 2022 (UTC).
- SD0001 Thanks for cleaning this up: any idea what I did wrong? I used the nomination form, I didn't think there was much syntax to get wrong. Vanamonde (Talk) 04:22, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
- Vanamonde93 The biography wikilink in the hook in the original revision was missing the second closing bracket. However, I'm not sure why a benign syntax issue like that was causing template substitution to fail altogether. – SD0001 (talk) 14:06, 1 November 2022 (UTC)
- I'm not really sure if most readers would get the significance of Ishi, so may I give a suggestion? I thought it was interesting that someone would write a biography on her husband. Maybe lean more towards that angle instead? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 14:38, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: How's ALT1 and ALT2 below? Vanamonde (Talk) 16:37, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
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: ... that Theodora Kroeber wrote a biography of her husband that was described as a work of value to anthropologists?
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... that Theodora Kroeber wrote a biography of her husband that was described as a "welcome and refreshing exception" to the "often embarrassing" biographies of men written by their wives?
- I think ALT2 is the best option here. This does still need a full review though. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:01, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
Repeating that this nom still needs a full review. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 11:26, 15 November 2022 (UTC)
Well-written and intriguing article. New enough, long enough, well sourced, no copyvio, neutral, critical reception section is balanced. QPQ is done. Hook has been reworked. I wanted to propose 1 minor edit to ALT2, and that is a descriptor for Theodora, since we've now lost the connection to anthropology. @Vanamonde93: So how about:
- ALT2a: ... that anthropologist Theodora Kroeber wrote a biography of her husband that was described as a "welcome and refreshing exception" to the "often embarrassing" biographies of men written by their wives? Cielquiparle (talk) 22:47, 15 November 2022 (UTC)
- @Cielquiparle: That works for me, thank you! As it's only a single word change, I believe you would be justified in approving it yourself. Vanamonde (Talk) 23:04, 15 November 2022 (UTC)
Approving ALT2a as good to go. Cielquiparle (talk) 23:23, 15 November 2022 (UTC)
