Template:Did you know nominations/Coronation of Mindon Min

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 23:59, 9 August 2021 (UTC)

Coronation of Mindon Min

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... that the regnal title of Mindon Min chosen for his coronation was Sīripavara Vijayānanta Yasapaṇḍita Tribhavanā Dityādhipati Mahādhammarājādhirājā? Source: Maung Maung Tin, U (October 2004). Konbaung Set Yazawin (Chronicle of Konbaung Dynasty) (in Burmese). 3 (4th ed.). p. 269.
- ALT1:... that at the coronation of Mindon Min, the regnal title of the King from the golden palm-leaf manuscript, which, together with its ruby-studded stand, was offered to the King by the Prince of Mekkhaya? Source: Maung Maung Tin, U (October 2004). Konbaung Set Yazawin (Chronicle of Konbaung Dynasty) (in Burmese). 3 (4th ed.). p. 275.
- ALT2:... that as part of the coronation of Mindon Min, the square yuzana (12.72 square mi) around the capital was designated a sanctuary? Source: Maung Maung Tin, U (October 2004). Konbaung Set Yazawin (Chronicle of Konbaung Dynasty) (in Burmese). 3 (4th ed.). p. 277.

Reviewed: Jamiat Ulema-e-Hind

Improved to Good Article status by Zin Win Hlaing (talk). Self-nominated at 12:46, 20 July 2021 (UTC).

Zin Win Hlaing, QPQs aren't required for first five DYK nominations, and I see this is your first DYK nomination. It is late night here, so I can't check everything right now but I see that the hooks are too long. Can you please shorten them? Less than 200 characters, because 200 is hard limit. Thanks. ─ The Aafī ^{^(talk)} 19:17, 20 July 2021 (UTC)

TheAafi, thanks for your clarification. I have shortened them. Zin Win Hlaing (talk) 03:54, 21 July 2021 (UTC)

Zin Win Hlaing Thanks. I am personally inclined to ALT2, which I've slightly modified below. How is that? ─ The Aafī ^{^(talk)} 04:38, 21 July 2021 (UTC)

ALT2a:... that as part of the coronation of Mindon Min, the square yuzana around the capital was designated a sanctuary?

TheAafi, yeah it's better. Zin Win Hlaing (talk) 04:48, 21 July 2021 (UTC)

DYKcheck passes. No copyvios. This is good to go wo with Alt2a in my opinion. If promoter feels happy with any other hook, they may happily proceed. ─ The Aafī ^{^(talk)} 04:58, 21 July 2021 (UTC)