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Created by Bloom6132 (talk). Self-nominated at 01:42, 20 July 2020 (UTC).
who is responsible for looking after its spiritual and administrative needsI feel that "looking after" might be a bit informal. Would it be worthwhile to change this to one of: attending to, tending to, caring for, taking care of, managing, or similar?
The current archbishop is Christian Lépine.I'm always wary of "current" when this might fall out of date. How would you feel about changing this to: Christian Lépine has been archbishop since 2012. One more thing: in the picture captions, it says one bishop reigned for a period and another served for a period. Should these be the same for consistency, or is there a distinction? (BTW: these notes do not affect pass/fail of the DYK.) – Reidgreg (talk) 16:53, 5 August 2020 (UTC)
Lartigue, the first ordinary of the archdiocese, was also the first of seven bishops and archbishops born in Montreal.We could assume from context that this means "bishops and archbishops of Montreal" but perhaps this should be explicit so to not include people who were born in Montreal and became bishops elsewhere (such as Gerald Emmett Carter who became archbishop of Toronto). Suggest: Lartigue, the first ordinary of the archdiocese, was also the first of seven bishops and archbishops of Montreal who were born in the city. One final matter: the tag on the picture should be updated to indicate that it is public domain in the United States, which I believe to be the case. – Reidgreg (talk) 16:53, 5 August 2020 (UTC)