Template:Did you know nominations/Tito Masoud

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 22:13, 28 September 2023 (UTC)

• ... that Hamas militants Tito Masoud and Nidal Farhat manufactured the first Qassam rocket in 2001, which was a major turning point in the war between Palestinian armed groups and Israel? Source: www.jstor.org/stable/10.31430/almuntaqa.4.1.0078
  • ALT1: ... that Hamas militant Tito Masoud, who manufactured the first Qassam rocket, became wanted by Israel after a colleague revealed his name under interrogation? Source: revealed name: https://content.time.com/time/magazine/article/0,9171,605511-3,00.html; Qassam fact: www.jstor.org/stable/10.31430/almuntaqa.4.1.0078
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ruby Diamond

Created by Longhornsg (talk). Self-nominated at 16:31, 28 August 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Tito Masoud; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

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Overall: @Longhornsg: The final two sentences in the article feel more like an editorial than a neutral encyclopedic article. If you can clean up those sentences, then we should be good to go. ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 22:46, 27 September 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, @Nihonjoe:. Just removed the sentences wholesale. Longhornsg (talk) 15:29, 28 September 2023 (UTC)

That works, Longhornsg. We're good to go, then. ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 17:30, 28 September 2023 (UTC)