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Typhoon Nat (1991)
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The track of Typhoon Nat
- ... that 1991's Typhoon Nat was described as having a "most unusual" track (pictured)?
- Source: Hong Kong Government
Converted from a redirect by TheNuggeteer (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 17 past nominations.
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:36, 24 August 2024 (UTC).
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Policy compliance:
- Adequate sourcing:
- The section titled Analysis is missing an inline citation. - Neutral:
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
Hook eligibility:
- Cited: - The hook is located under Analysis, which contains no inline citations.
- Interesting:
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The above issues need to be addressed. Also, the article calls the track "erratic," which makes more sense than "erroneous," which is the word the hook uses. Ergo Sum 16:01, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
- @TheNuggeteer: Please address the above concerns. Z1720 (talk) 23:37, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
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- @TheNuggeteer: Thanks for adding the inline citation. However, since that is a 96 page PDF, there should be citations to specific pages at each inline use, for example, using {{Sfn}}. I did a quick control-F search in that PDF and "erratic" does not come up, so citation to a specific page is necessary. Ergo Sum 01:53, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
- Used {{rp}} instead.
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗02:18, 9 September 2024 (UTC) - @Ergo Sum: Hello?
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗11:56, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- Page citation is good. However, unless I am still missing it on page 44, I do not see the words "random" or "erratic" as descriptions of the typhoon's movement. I see "most unusual," which is not the same thing as either of those words. Ergo Sum 13:05, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- Used {{rp}} instead.
- Changed the hook to fit the words.
🍗TheNuggeteer🍗13:09, 17 September 2024 (UTC)- The parts of the article that support the hook still say "erratic" and "random." Once those are corrected, the hook will be ready to go. Ergo Sum 13:40, 18 September 2024 (UTC)