User:Seraphimblade/Desk

Cleanup Taskforce
Desk Queue: 7
Areas of Expertise Copyediting for spelling, grammar, and flow; trimming excessive length and detail; fact-checking; rooting out original research; administrative assistance if required.

I'm a participant in the Cleanup Taskforce. Please add up to 7 open issues below by following the instructions at the Cleanup Taskforce page.

Current or pending tasks: (2)

Spore - In-universe and excessive plot/gameplay summary, lack of real-world context, too fannish.

Wildlife Park 2

The article is currently in urgent need of cleanup. Overusage of lists and little actual text. Punctuation and spelling are fine, but a basic cleanup should fix most of the problems. Thanks in advance. --Cuddly Panda 09:05, 28 May 2007 (UTC)

I don't think the lists are too long as much as the gameplay section is too short. RJFJR 13:26, 1 June 2007 (UTC)

And there's that aswell. We need you, Cleanup Taskforce! --Cuddly Panda 08:59, 7 June 2007 (UTC)

Definitely needs work. I've gotten a start by cutting (a lot of cutting, the complete lists are the stuff of game guides), and will try to find some independent source material from which to work. Seraphimblade ^{Talk to me} 08:14, 14 March 2008 (UTC)