Can you please assist to edit to make this article comply with your standards?
You had requed assistance in updating this article since it was out of date and that is all that i was doing.
I applogize if i violated any of your guidelines since i am new to Wikipedia.
In the event that you need any additional information, just let me know.Miami33131 (talk) 19:24, 14 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- There are a few issues. First, the tag at the top of this page is because it appears that you are the same person as user:Premier Cruises. If this is the case, you should be aware that using a "sockpuppet" in order to still edit after one account has been blocked is highly discouraged, and can result in further blocks. It would be in your best interest to go to the page Wikipedia:Sockpuppet investigations/Premier Cruises to respond. If you are a different user, just explain that fact. If you are the same user, the safest route is to usually admit not being aware that it was a WP policy, and to voluntarily state which account you wish to abandon.
- For the article content - the two main issues are that the text you are removing has refs providing citations to back up the text, while your text does not ... as well as your text using promotional wording that is not presented from a neutral point of view (see WP:NPOV). Remember, as an encyclopedia, you just need the facts; unless you have a reliable source using that wording to back it up, you should try to avoid phrasing such as "pioneering", "superior quality", etc. --- Barek (talk • contribs) - 19:35, 14 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]