Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Failed log/November 2022

The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was archived by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 28 November 2022 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Nominator(s): EN-Jungwon (talk) and Jal11497 (talk) 14:50, 14 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

After taking the 2020 list to FL status and nominating the 2021 list (which will hopefully be closed soon), here is the 2015 list. This is the third Music bank related list that I am nominating for FL status. Looking forward to your comment. -- EN-Jungwon 14:50, 14 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

• "actor and singer Park Bo-gum and Red Velvet member Irene became the host of the show" - host should be hosts (plural)
• "The single, along with "Lion Heart" by Girls' Generation ranked" - need a comma after Generation to close off the clause
• "The year began with "December, 2014 (The Winter's Tale)" by Exo" - doesn't read brilliantly, suggest "The first winner of the year was "December, 2014 (The Winter's Tale)" by Exo"
• "Super Junior's sub-unit Super Junior-D&E consisting of members Donghae and Eunhyuk won their first ever music show trophy" - source?
• "Girl group Red Velvet achieved their first music show win" - source?
• That's what I got on a quick first pass -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:10, 15 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@ChrisTheDude, all done. Thank you for the review. -- EN-Jungwon 18:15, 15 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

• Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:29, 20 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

• Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:16, 27 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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