The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 03:26:46 27 November 2019 (UTC) [1].
This list concerns the Lorenzo Bandini Trophy, one of the most famous and prestigious awards in the world of motor racing. I have recently redone the list and I believe that it meets the necessary criteria to be a featured list. MWright96 (talk) 08:12, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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Named after the Italian driver Lorenzo Bandini, who died three days after suffering severe burns in a major accident at the 1967 Monaco Grand Prix, the accolade's trophy, a ceramic replica of Bandini's Ferrari 312/67 adorned with the number 18, is usually awarded to an individual or team for "a commendable performance in motorsport", on the basis on how the success was achieved rather than the results attained, and their character and approach to racing.Too long. Split this into one sentence focusing on Bandini and one focusing on who the trophy is awarded to.
The 2019 winner of the Lorenzo Bandini Trophyjust say "2019 winner".
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) (there's only one reference per row)usually awarded to an individual or teamsince you already mentioned this in the first sentence, just cut "to an individual or team".
on the basis onchange to "based on" – Teratix ₵ 10:30, 20 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed (made some formatting tweaks), promoting. --PresN 03:26, 27 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 03:26:44 27 November 2019 (UTC) [3].
I worked on this list back when the series was airing; it has been off-air for about eight months now, so the content is stable and unlikely to change in the future. The list concerns Banana Fish, an influential manga series in the 80s/90s that was adapted into a series last year. I believe the list provides a plot overview without veering into excessive detail, is throughly sourced, and has a well-written lead section. I appreciate any feedback or comments. Morgan695 (talk) 02:57, 5 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Otherwise, everything looks good to me. I believe ChrisTheDude already has covered a lot so thank you for that. I have heard of this manga/anime when I was doing research on the boy's love genre as part of my M.A. project so it is nice to learn more about it. I hope my comments are helpful, and have a great rest of your day! Aoba47 (talk) 18:03, 10 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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I think it would be better if the article contained information about the anime production process, because so far I'm not seeing the jump from a B article to a Good article. I know Spoon 2Di released staff interviews which I think would be helpful in building the article. Also, this is the first time I'm seeing audio dramas listed in the episodes... for some reason I don't think they belong there because this article should focus on the animation itself. lullabying (talk) 16:29, 27 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Forgot to mention, the names of musicians and song titles cannot be in all capitals unless they are acronyms per MOS:JAPAN#Titles of media. lullabying (talk) 03:23, 29 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
3O Response: Given that the audio dramas were an official, canon part of the releases, were offered with the series media, and were a series unto themselves rather than a one-off or novelty, I think their inclusion is warranted. Seraphimblade Talk to me 03:56, 16 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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I only have one question:
All of my other potential comments/questions are covered by others, above. ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 22:57, 22 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Some minor thoughts I had:
Other than that, I think other editors pointed the other stuff. Ping me and I will support if everything goes well.Tintor2 (talk) 02:41, 23 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed, promoting. --PresN 03:26, 27 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 23:10:56 24 November 2019 (UTC) [4].
With the 1980s almost completed, it's time to start on the 1970s, beginning with a year when two of country's most legendary performers took their repective signature songs to number one...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 11:23, 2 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
23 different singles topped the chart, then published under the title Hot Country SinglesThis confused me on a first reading (I read it as "the songs topped the chart, then were published under this title"). I'm not suggesting this will seriously mislead readers, but it may trip them up, and replacing "then" with "at this time" somewhere in the phrase will solve the problem with only a couple of extra words.
playlists submitted by country music radio stations and sales reports submitted by stores.I would avoid using "submitted" twice in close succession.
legendary country singer Hank Williams"legendary" is a bit WP:PEACOCK-y. Attribution or a milder term might be appropriate.
The final number one of the year was "Rose Garden" by Lynn Anderson, which went to number one in the issue of Billboard dated December 26 to begin a run which would last until the issue dated January 30, 1971.Since its number-one status is already mentioned, just say "which began a run in the issue of Billboard dated December 26" etc.
Sonny James spent a total of 14 weeks at number one during the year.1) "a total of" is unnecessary here 2) 14 is a numeral here but it's spelled out in the lead.
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Hi ChrisTheDude, please find my comments below:
Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 09:31, 11 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 21:55:38 17 November 2019 (UTC) [7].
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I am nominating this for featured list because he is one of the directors who brought change to the Nepali film industry. Besides directing he also acts and sings.___CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk (We are the champions, my friends) 11:23, 15 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I hope this helps, and good luck with the nomination. Aoba47 (talk) 23:55, 22 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed, with some tweaks. Promoting. --PresN 21:55, 17 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 23:06:57 17 November 2019 (UTC) [8].
I have successfully brought Harrison, Lennon, and McCartney's song lists all up to FL so last but not least, the drummer. One to go before the Fab Four together. While Ringo may not have had the most successful solo career (especially after 1974), that doesn't change the fact that he still one of the greatest drummers of all time and the world would not be the same without him. As always, I can't wait to hear all your comments and concerns. :-) – zmbro (talk) 03:59, 29 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Talking of "Spooky Weirdness", it seems that some of the S tracks aren't in the right order -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:03, 2 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Wonderful work with the list. Once my very minor and nitpicky comments are addressed, I will be more than happy to support this for promotion. Have a great rest of your weekend. Aoba47 (talk) 01:02, 4 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Source review – There are a few formatting issues and the like that could stand to be fixed before promotion occurs:
The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 21:55:40 17 November 2019 (UTC) [9].
I am nominating this for featured list because, first it follows all the Featured List criteria:
Secondly, the article has been constructed taking inspiration from FL articles like List of international goals scored by Lionel Messi and List of international goals scored by Cristiano Ronaldo and shows almost identical in nature and thus can be included in Featured list. Dey subrata (talk) 23:07, 17 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Despite the extremely quick support above, I found a lot of issues. Most of them are minor, but nonetheless they need fixing............
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*"As of 5 September 2019, he scored 72 goals" => "As of 5 September 2019, he has scored 72 goals"
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*The refs also need a lot of work, but I will look at that separately..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:41, 18 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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HTH -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:34, 19 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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I've done a run through and picked out some points above. Kosack (talk) 07:05, 23 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
These are the only two things that I can see. It seems that this list has already received an extensive review from other editors at this point. Once my comments are addressed and resolved, I will be more than happy to support this for promotion. Aoba47 (talk) 01:33, 28 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
*My personal preference would be to apply column widths to the first three tables for a cleaner look/transition between the three. (Optional)
@Dey subrata: I have a lot of issues with your list before I can reasonably say I would want to support it. I will try to do a source review very soon.
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*The first two sentences of the lead seem really off. I would much rather prefer if they said: "Sunil Chhetri is an Indian professional footballer who represents the India national football team as a striker or winger. The captain of the India national team, he is also his country's all-time top goalscorer and most-capped player."
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Resolved comments from Giants2008 (Talk) 20:10, 6 November 2019 (UTC)[reply] |
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Source review – I have several concerns about the reliability of references in the article, along with a couple of other things:
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Promoting. --PresN 21:55, 17 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 21:55:41 17 November 2019 (UTC) [10].
Came back from holiday to find that the list for 1986 has been promoted, so here's the list for 1987 which (assuming it's successful) will complete a 30-year run of country number ones at FL status. As ever, all comments will be addressed promptly..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 21:23, 2 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
As always, wonderful work with the list. Once my comments are addressed, I will be more than happy to support this for promotion. If you have the time and interest, I would greatly appreciate any feedback on my current FAC. It is about a country music album so it somewhat falls in your area of interest, although it did not appear on any music chart lol. Either way, have a great start to your week! Aoba47 (talk) 02:31, 3 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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Hi ChrisTheDude, please find my comments below:
Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 09:55, 13 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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* For "Mind your Own Business" song, I can't see the featured artists confirmed in the reference.
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Promoting. --PresN 21:55, 17 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 21:55:43 17 November 2019 (UTC) [13].
My previous nomination is now at three supports. This list is about the chief ministers of Jharkhand, another state created in 2000. This time, the legislature website and the official CM website had no CM list, so I had to create one myself and search the Frontline archives to source it. The list is in good condition, but there may be some problems with how some things are worded, probably. TryKid (talk) 10:58, 8 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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Promoting. --PresN 21:55, 17 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 23:03:02 10 November 2019 (UTC) [14].
Previous nomination failed to reach consensus after very long time nevertheless whole list and the lead has been almost completly rebuilt since start of previous nomination. I tried to resolve every mentioned problem. This time the discography is starting from significantly better position. Eurohunter (talk) 20:54, 25 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Once my comments are addressed, I will support this for promotion. Aoba47 (talk) 02:44, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 06:47:49 6 November 2019 (UTC) [15].
I am nominating this for featured list because my nomination for List of National Football League rushing champions has passed. My other nomination, [[16]], has unanimous support so far with all problems resolved so a second nomination should be acceptable.
This is the second in a series of discographies I have been working on for the most important contemporary Christian music artists. Michael W. Smith is one of the best-selling Christian artists of all time (the best-selling male artist, perhaps), with over four decades of fairly constant music output. He started as the keyboardist for Amy Grant, the best-selling Christian artist ever and the two are great friends to this day. Uniquely he's had RIAA certified albums in at least six different areas: Christian pop/rock, Christian worship music, mainstream pop/adult contemporary music (including "Place in This World" and "I Will Be Here For You", top 40 hits in the US and Canada), Christmas music, video albums, and an instrumental album written in the style of film scores. Making a discography for such a varied career required extensive research and tough decision making for the lede, but I think this article does a great job of balancing everything. If there's anything I'm iffy on its the exact prose in the lede, but I think a good discussion here will help hammer out any issues. Toa Nidhiki05 23:59, 14 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Cheers, ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:12, 16 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Pinging Walter Görlitz per his request. Toa Nidhiki05 12:27, 23 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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The rowspans aren't my favorite, but apparently not an issue, so promoting. --PresN 06:47, 6 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 06:47:52 6 November 2019 (UTC) [17].
This is the latest in my lists of Sites of Special Scientific Interest and is in the same format as FLs such as List of Sites of Special Scientific Interest in Suffolk and List of Sites of Special Scientific Interest in Kent. I have not been able to archive the citations as the bot appears to be down. Dudley Miles (talk) 17:58, 18 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
An impressively comprehensive list, well-structured and fully referenced. There really is very little to complain about, and I'll be pleased to support, subject to consideration of the meagre gleanings below. With apologies, my comments will be in batches.
Looks great so far, I've reviewed several of these and the standard is already very good. Just these few minor quibbles. Mattximus (talk) 14:46, 28 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Mattximus: Are you good with this, or are we still stuck on the Homo/human issue? --PresN 17:04, 28 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 06:47, 6 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 06:47:44 6 November 2019 (UTC) [25].
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I am nominating this for featured list because I believe it meets all aspects of the FL criteria, comprehensively covering the many year-end accolades received by Red Dead Redemption 2 while also following accessibility guidelines. I believe that list is good to go all the way, and would appreciate your thoughts. – Rhain ☔ 08:50, 16 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Otherwise, everything else looks great. Once my comments are addressed, I will be more than happy to support this for promotion. I hope this helps. Aoba47 (talk) 02:10, 18 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Rhain I'm fine with either format, though I'm leaning towards the film table format since the awards look "neater" (due to them being listed only once per column) and I'm kind of biased to alphabetical order. But like I said, I'm fine with either so I have no problems with the current one. Either format, I support this for promotion -- Wrath X (talk) 01:04, 23 October 2019 (UTC)
Review aggregator Metacritic assigned the game a normalized score of 97 out of 100, indicating "universal acclaim"Rewrite this to "On the review-aggregation website Metacritic, the game received 'universal acclaim', with an overall weighted average score of 97 out of 100." Metacritic doesn't actually calculate normalized scores but weighted average of reviews from professional critics and publications: https://www.metacritic.com/faq#item18 Please modify that footnote, too.
The game had the largest opening weekend in the history of entertainment, making over $725 million in revenue in three days, and selling over 17 million copies in total in two weeks.Eliminate these superfluous "in revenue" and "in total"
But generally everything else looks good. Spy-cicle💥 Talk? 21:27, 2 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 06:47, 6 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 22:04:44 3 November 2019 (UTC) [26].
Back in March I successfully nominated List of felids, a list of all species in the Felidae family (aka cats); I figured at the time that the natural followup would be dogs. It took much longer than I expected, but 6 months later here is List of canids, comprising all species in the Canidae family, aka dogs and foxes. The format is based on List of felids, and is generated by an offline script to maintain consistency, while the structure is based off of the tree of life projects' favorite Mammal Species of the World plus generally accepted modern research. Unlike the cat list, this list also includes prehistoric canids, as during the development of the list a rough consensus emerged that the list belonged here instead of Canidae and I plan to backfill the felids list the same way for consistency. The format changes there because the data is frankly impossible to get for ranges and ecology, etc. for the vast majority of animals from millions of years ago, but there is at least a generally accepted taxonomy for most of the extinct species. Anyways, the list as a whole is pretty exhaustively filled in and cited, so I think it's ready to go- thanks for reviewing! --PresN 04:18, 1 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
"In addition to the extant Caninae, Canidae comprises two extinct subfamilies designated as Hesperocyoninae and Borophaginae."
"Preys on a wide variety of foods, including both small and large mammals, fruit, and insects"?