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I think this list is in line with the standards for the Snooker world ranking lists for the previous years which are featured lists. In 1980/1981, Ray Reardon still topped the rankings as he had since 1976. Any suggestions for improvement are welcome. Thank you. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:37, 3 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
BennyOnTheLoose, nothing else from me, another great article. MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 01:27, 4 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
That's all I have for this list EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 11:20, 11 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 01:01, 28 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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Canada has 20 WHS and 12 on the tentative list. Standard style for this type of articles. The list for Costa Rica is already seeing support so I am adding another nomination. Tone 08:55, 26 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Canada has served as a member of the World Heritage Committee four times, 1976–1978, 1985–1991, 1995–2001, and 2005–2009.- after "four times" I suggest using a colon instead of a comma
The complex contains eight turf houses, three of which were dwellings, one forge, and four workshops used for ship repair.- using commas for "three of which were dwellings" makes it look like part of the list; use parantheses to avoid confusion: "The complex contains eight turf houses (three of which were dwellings), one forge, and four workshops used for ship repair.
The site at Joggins has produced some of the best fossil record from the Carboniferous period...- fossil record? Do you mean fossil records? Or possibly fossils recorded?
a historical photo from Chilkoot Pass in 1898 is shown- replace shown with "pictured"
The landscape in the high Arctic is defined by ice, however...- semicolon after ice
Tone, all done, very nice work. MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 14:06, 26 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Promoting. --PresN 01:01, 28 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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Another bird list, this time the somewhat larger and lot more homogenous family that is the tapaculos. There are technically 65 species recognized by the IOU, but I'd say around 40 of them are clones of each other that no sane person would bother differentiating; taxonomists are not particularly good at avoiding such activities, so here we are. Have at it! AryKun (talk) 14:45, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Ooh, another list!
...best detected by their vocalizations.and
...are best identified by their vocalizations.- repetition.
...with more than 30 species being described from the region."having been described", or "endemic to that region".
...are difficult to differentiate on the basis of appearance and are generally described based onthe basis ofgenetic data...
Since no-one else seems interested:
Therefore, pass source review. --SilverTiger12 (talk) 13:40, 6 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Looks like there's very little wrong here, so I wouldn't be surprised to find no issues. MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 00:01, 15 September 2023 (UTC) Support - Yeah, I got nothing, excellent work. MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 00:10, 15 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Promoting. --PresN 01:00, 28 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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The next animal list is taking some time to sort out, so lets check out something different! Way back in 2012, I took the then-five categories of the Nebula Awards through FLC, following the 15+ lists on scifi/fantasy awards I'd already done. At the time, I thought I was done, but in 2019 the Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America added a category for "game writing". I let it sit and grow for a while, adding the Ray Bradbury Award in 2020 when they retroactively made it official, but at this point it's been around long enough to be counted alongside the 50-year-old+ categories that already have FLs. It's still a bit of an odd duck—the Nebulas are mostly followed by book-readers, so with this list sitting in the intersection of SFF writing and video games it doesn't get much mainstream press on its own. It gets to tag along with the other categories, however, so here we are. This list follows the same conventions as the other seven Nebula lists, as well as the other 30+ SFF award FLs I've done, so hopefully everything is ship-shape. Thanks for reviewing! --PresN 00:59, 14 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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Hope it's okay if I step in and try to help. I'm not particularly the best in proses so please let me know if I made a wrong comment. Note that I tend to enjoy shortening stuff, hope you won't find this frequency being annoying. GeraldWL 08:03, 15 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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No spotcheck necessarry. Since there's so few sources, it won't take too long, so why not a regular review as well. MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 15:00, 18 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Interactive fiction developer Choice of Games has had the most games nominated with six over four years.- just to clarify this, I think "a total of" should be added before "six over four years"; otherwise, seeing these dates next to each other is a bit confusing
PresN, that's all I got, very nice job! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 15:00, 18 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Support: Not finding any issues (did a reference check and general check). Good job! Hey man im josh (talk) 15:19, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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First season has three supports, so I'll go ahead with the second! Like last season, this one also influenced current events; the president of FIFA resigned two days after an episode aired on the 212015 corruption scandal, and in another instance, New York's bail policy was changed after a LWT episode aired on the topic. Excited for comments! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 13:29, 5 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good! Support -- Hey man im josh (talk) 14:33, 5 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Staking a claim here. – Epicgenius (talk) 16:49, 8 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
|caption=caption_text. It defaults to not being visible, so if you want to change that, add
|show_caption=yas well. Note that I think I missed this on the Season 1 list, so please add it there as well.
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I am nominating this for featured list because I have rewrited all of list, and added a lot of content following the format of other Featured Lists 金色黎明 (talk) 12:41, 4 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
— RunningTiger123 (talk) 19:22, 9 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
More comments:
— RunningTiger123 (talk) 17:47, 10 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Support – RunningTiger123 (talk) 17:01, 11 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
No spotcheck needed, will focus on formatting/reliability. MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 14:51, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
During this period, Connecticut Republican Party leader J. Henry Roraback built up...
金色黎明, that's all from me, nice work on. The color usage in the tables is very visually appealing. MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 14:51, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Promoting. --PresN 15:18, 18 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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Costa Rica has four WHS and one site on the tentative list. With the lists for Panama and Yemen just promoted, I am this time nominating a shorter list. Standard format. I am saving some longer ones for later (Canada, Argentina, India are more or less ready - suggestions which one to run next welcome!) Tone 08:53, 25 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for this nomination! I only have one real comment:
Costa Rica accepted the convention on 23 August 1977.What does "accepted" here mean? If they became signatory to the convention, did they ratify it on the same day?
Regarding your next list, I'd like to suggest Germany. By the way, what do you think about the maps used in that list? That's potentially useful. If Germany is an acceptable option for you, I'd be happy to work on it with you. I also speak German, so that might help with the sources. Thanks again for your work! Actualcpscm scrutinize, talk 10:44, 25 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Support Actualcpscm scrutinize, talk 16:21, 25 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
...including three bird and two reptile.- plural? If not, amend it with "species" to clarify
Stretching from the Pacific coast across the mountain range with the highest peak Rincón de la Vieja at 1,916 metres (6,286 ft) (pictured) to the lowlands on the Caribbean side, the area comprises numerous habitats.- the dependent clause in this is rather large, I think it could use a bit of rearranging- perhaps, "Stretching from the Pacific coast across Rincón de la Vieja, the mountain range with the highest peak at 1,916 metres (6,286 ft) (pictured), the area comprises numerous habitats."
Some of them reach more than 2.5 metres...- "some of the spheres..."
That's all from me, great work, as usual! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 14:39, 25 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I see that this has been listed as need a source review- why not? No spotcheck, looking at formatting/reliability. MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 12:51, 17 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Tone, little concerns over this, lovely work as usual. MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 12:55, 17 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Promoting. --PresN 15:18, 18 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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This is #7 in the series of NFL annual statistical leaders. The formatting is based on past successful featured lists from the series and, if successful, would mark the completion of rushing related stats. As always, I will do my best to respond and make changes as quickly as possible. Hey man im josh (talk) 17:57, 14 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Is there a reason there is no table listing the players with the most seasons leading the league...– Not really except that we haven't really standardized whether it should be included or not. You pointed to the two of the five NFL annual leader FLs that have such a table, while the other three FL do not. Never the less, after giving it some thought, I do think the table is useful so I've gone ahead and added it.
...maybe change that second one to "running for 28 touchdowns".– Done
These next two are more nitpicks and probably optional. The lede seems a little sparse, perhaps add something about the few players who achieved over 20 rushing touchdowns in one season?– Added a mention that there has been eleven instances where a player has rushed for over 20 touchdowns in a season and that only two players have done so twice.
Perhaps add a key to the AFL annual rushing touchdowns leaders section.– I went back and forth on this one prior to the nomination. NFL lists are inconsistent when it comes to including the key in the AFL section, with the assumption apparently being that people will reference the key above the NFL table. After giving it some thought, we can't really go wrong by having the key relisted in the AFL section as well. I've included a key with the active player and HoF portion of the key removed, as those are not relevant to the AFL table (no active or HoF players in the table).
|website=
name for ref 8, 9 and 10-- EN-Jungwon 10:50, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Happy to do a source review! No spotcheck needed, looking at formatting/reliability. Will do soon- ping me if I forget by tomorrow! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 19:26, 5 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Hey man im josh, all done, lovely work! Impressed you discovered my WikiCup strategy ;) MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 00:33, 6 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed, promoting. --PresN 15:18, 18 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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This is my second National Football League FLC. This list documents the 21 seasons played by the Houston Texans in the NFL. Thanks in advance to everyone who provides their feedback :) ULPS (talk) 02:57, 13 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
--MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 00:30, 14 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
This is my first FLC review, so I'm sorry if I've missed anything. The list appears to meet all of the featured list critera, having an appropriate style, structure, prose, and lead while comprehensively covering the defined scope. Knit picks:
J. J. Watt has won three DPOY awards and one WPMOY award while playing for the Texans– I think this caption under the J. J. Watt picture reads better if you remove the word "has".
Bill O'Brien served as the head coach of the Houston Texans from 2014 to 2020...– I would lose "of the Houston Texans" from this caption.
I'm not finding much to critique with this list. Hey man im josh (talk) 17:37, 16 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
|+ caption_textas the first line of the table code; if that caption would duplicate a nearby section header, you can make it screen-reader-only by putting
|+ {{sronly|caption_text}}instead.
!scope=colto each header cell, e.g.
!Finish
becomes !scope=col | Finish
. If the cell spans multiple columns with a colspan, then use !scope=colgroupinstead. You have this on most of them, but are missing "Regular season" and the 3 below it.
!scope=rowto each primary cell, e.g.
!{{nfly|2002}}
becomes !scope=row | {{nfly|2002}}
. If the cell spans multiple rows with a rowspan, then use !scope=rowgroupinstead.
As this page is currently listed with a source reviewed needed, I thought I'd look it over.
Source review passed. I already supported above, but I support still / harder now. Hey man im josh (talk) 16:02, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Support - my comment is really just a minor detail, I see no other issues- great work! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 19:42, 3 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Promoting. --PresN 15:18, 18 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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The list for 1974 has already got three supports, so I figure there's no harm in nominating 1975. As ever, feedback will be most gratefully received and swiftly acted upon -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 21:55, 27 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
{{abbr|Ref.|Reference}}
Support - excellent work as always- happy to have no comments! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 22:00, 30 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Support --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 16:48, 17 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Promoting. --PresN 15:20, 18 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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After Hey man im josh and I's extensive work on it, this list is finally complete. It would be great to have a FL to support Angela Merkel, which I plan to bring to FAC in the (hopefully not-too-distant) future after recently bringing it up to GA. Hey man im josh was kind enough to guide me through the process and do at least half the work on this list, thanks again for that! The most recent addition to Merkel's state honours (from Germany) received lots of media attention, and I expect that this list will continue to grow for at least a few years. Actualcpscm scrutinize, talk 14:11, 24 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Merkel was chancellor of Germany from...- "the" chancellor of Germany
...and she was the first female chancellor of Germany.- remove "she", as the subject is already identified at the start of the sentence
Merkel has also commonly been described as leader of the free world.- "the" leader of the...
Actualcpscm, nothing else from me, excellent work! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 01:00, 25 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed, promoting. --PresN 15:19, 18 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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Where the chaos of Last Week Tonight began- of course, with a bang! Five episodes in, they transformed the Net Neutrality debate, settling Oliver's place in the late night show industry nicely.
I should clarify the reasoning for differing from most TV season articles. Talk shows are bad at naming their episodes- on Amazon, the episodes are just numbered. For this reason, the "Episode Title" is instead replaced with a "Main Segment" slot. As for the content of the episode summaries, using paragraphs seemed redundant, so I stuck with the descriptors that were there before. A note on sourcing: in the amazing HBO Max to "Max" transition, HBO removed seasons 1-7 of LWT from their site, so there's no actual way to watch old episodes in their entirety (unless you purchase the entire season on Amazon or elsewhere). Thankfully, Amazon retained the episode descriptions, so most summaries use info from Amazon or other news sites related to episodes. MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 21:38, 16 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I've made a few copy edits here and there, which I hope you don't mind. Let's not screw this up.
Fun article :) Ping me in any replies! Pamzeis (talk) 14:27, 22 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Source review:
Additionally, the image needs alt text. Hey man im josh (talk) 18:00, 1 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Overall a great list, just a couple of grammar fixes.
Source review passed, promoting. --PresN 15:18, 18 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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After working on Angeline Quinto's main article and her list of roles and awards and bringing them to featured status, I am nominating her list of songs next. Happy to address your comments and thanks to all who take the time to review the list. Pseud 14 (talk) 14:40, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Pseud 14, nothing else from me, fantastic work as usual! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 22:08, 2 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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This is the eight article in this series that I am nominating for FL status. As always the list follows the same pattern as previous lists. This might be the last list of this series that I will be working on so any suggestions for improvement are welcome. -- EN-Jungwon 14:10, 9 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
No spotcheck needed, I'll focus on formatting/reliability. MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 14:42, 18 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
EN-Jungwon, I think that's it really. I have to AGF on the authors and dates since I cannot read Korean, but I trust it's all good since it seems like most general articles or the individual weeks are authorless. No questions on the reliability of the sources. Nice work! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 14:42, 18 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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Here's the latest in this series for your consideration. In this particular year, behold! The coming of disco :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 14:03, 21 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
That's all I got, very nice work. MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 17:53, 21 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
{{abbr|Ref.|Reference}}
Support. Hey man im josh (talk) 19:09, 24 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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We continue our journey of animal lists through the primates with this list (#31 in our series of animal FLCs). This list is the second of the six-ish subgroupings of the order Primates; for the last one (lorisoids), I did the superfamily instead of each small family or the entire order/suborder like I normally would, and one of the reasons was this list: a superfamily containing one family, Cercopithecidae, itself containing 159 species. Pushing the limits of how many species I really want to put in a list, but no good way to divide it unless I break it down to subfamilies (which isn't really how readers think of these groups). This group was historically known as "Old World monkeys", because... it's the big family of monkeys that aren't in North/South America. It was a pain to source (for some reason, researchers working in southeast Asia love to document species without ever recording exactly how big they are or what exactly they eat), but it's a big chunk of the order now done. Anyways, as always, the list follows the pattern of the previous lists and reflects previous FLC comments. Thanks for reviewing! --PresN 04:26, 24 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Otherwise, every looks good. --SilverTiger12 (talk) 15:26, 24 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
PresN, got nothing else, excellent job on consistency! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 21:54, 2 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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After the previous nomination's archival last month, I will nominate this list again. Chompy Ace 06:08, 14 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Happy to see a film scorer as the image on an awards list, it's rare you see them as the front face of major films! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 00:54, 15 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
That's all I got, very nice work on this article. MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 00:54, 15 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with Chris, this is another well sorted listicle, just some comments and I'll support! GeraldWL 08:14, 15 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
{{Custom award|[[Dallas–Fort Worth Film Critics Association Awards]]|0|1}}
→ {{Custom award|[[Dallas–Fort Worth Film Critics Association Awards]]|1|1}}
{{Custom award|[[Georgia Film Critics Association Awards]]|1|2}}
→ {{Custom award|[[Georgia Film Critics Association Awards]]|2|2}}
{{Custom award|[[St. Louis Film Critics Association Awards]]|0|2}}
→ {{Custom award|[[St. Louis Film Critics Association Awards]]|2|2}}
|wins= 9
→ |wins= 10
That's all. -- EN-Jungwon 14:51, 25 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Support. Good stuff @Chompy Ace. -- Hey man im josh (talk) 18:15, 1 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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I am nominating this for featured list because I reworked the table per other list of accolades articles and added more references in the parent article. Chompy Ace 07:40, 19 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
No spotcheck needed, will check formatting/reliability. MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 14:00, 19 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
That's all I got, very nice work. MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 14:00, 19 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
— RunningTiger123 (talk) 00:52, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Support – RunningTiger123 (talk) 02:44, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The sentences starting Skyfall debuted at the Royal Albert Hall...
and Made on a production budget of...
read a little awkwardly and could use a copyedit. For the second sentence, I'd suggest Produced on a budget of...
and splitting the sentence into two shorter ones. Actualcpscm scrutinize, talk 16:12, 24 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Support -- Hey man im josh (talk) 19:15, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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I am nominating this as a featured list as a companion to Women's Professional Billiards Championship. I've followed the format from there for the main table. The Women's Professional Snooker Championship never attracted many participants, but regularly made the national press, and received varying degrees of coverage in the specialist billiards and snooker journal of the time. Ruth Harrison dominated the competition, winning all eight of the editions that she entered. As ever, all suggestions for improvement are welcome. I can provide extracts from offline sources to reviewers. Many thanks. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 18:01, 27 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
BennyOnTheLoose, it's an impressive article considering how little information there is about the tournament on the web. Very nice job! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 18:28, 7 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
That is my lot for this list EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 15:36, 25 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Reviewing Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 12:11, 1 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoted. --PresN 02:52, 3 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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This is the list of songs recorded by American singer-songwriter Olivia Rodrigo. Don't think miss Rodrigo needs much of an introduction, she is the girl with the song about the driving license or whatever. Thanks a lot to everyone who will take the time to give their feedback here.--NØ 12:02, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Will try not to screw up. Version reviewed
Formatting
Reliability
Verifiability
Great list with mostly very minor concerns. Ping me in your replies! Pamzeis (talk) 08:08, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The tables look all good for me, so I'mma just review the lead. GeraldWL 07:02, 19 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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* "In 2016, Rodrigo and her Bizaardvark co-star Madison Hu" --> "In 2016, Rodrigo and Madison Hu, who had worked with her on the TV series Bizaardvark,"
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Article overall looks good. Not seeing an image review so I'll focus on that.
Image review: Passed
Support -- Hey man im josh (talk) 13:09, 30 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Promoted. --PresN 02:51, 3 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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This is part of a series of NFL annual statistic leaders that I'm working on. The style and format of the list is modeled after my recent successful FL nomination of List of National Football League annual receiving touchdowns leaders. Please let me know if there is anything that can be improved upon and I will do my best to address any and all concerns that are brought up in a timely manner. Hey man im josh (talk) 16:56, 17 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
url-status=live
to url-status=dead
url-status=live
to url-status=dead
|date=5 February 2021
That's all. -- EN-Jungwon 16:25, 21 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
{{Use dmy dates}}
template to the page. If you have time could you take a look at my FL nomination Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Music Bank Chart winners (2019)/archive1. -- EN-Jungwon 16:18, 24 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
has also lead passed" doesn't sound right.– It was meant to be "Brees has also passed for over 5,000 yards in a season five times", noting a specific milestone accomplishment (only 9 quarterbacks have ever passed for over 5,000 yards in a season and Brees has done it 5 times). I've made all of the changes and I feel silly for having missed these. Thank you for your feedback @ChrisTheDude. Hey man im josh (talk) 19:18, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The NFL did not begin keeping official records until the 1932 season. In addition to the overall National Football League (NFL) passing yards leaders...You first mention the National Football League (and its abbreviation) after you use already used the abbreviation.
With his victory in Super Bowl LVII in 2023, Patrick Mahomes became the first player to lead the league in passing yards and win a league championship in the same season since George Blanda did so in the 1961 AFL season.seems a little wordy, could you convey this in a better way? (this one is nitpicky)
You first mention the National Football League (and its abbreviation) after you use already used the abbreviation.– I've moved the first mention of the abbreviation, thanks for that catch.
seems a little wordy, could you convey this in a better way?– It does feel a bit clunky. Perhaps just shortened to:
In 2023, Patrick Mahomes became the first player to lead the league in passing yards and win a league championship in the same season since George Blanda did so in the 1961 AFL season? I played around with some variations and this is the one that felt the most right.
After leading the league in 2022, ...-- do you think this is adequete?
Patrick Mahomes led the league in passing yards in 2022 and became the first player in the Super Bowl era to do so and win a league championship in the same season."Hey man im josh (talk) 13:54, 31 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Crazy that this has waited so long seemingly only because of an image review(?), but I'll try to do one.
--NØ 20:15, 30 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Promoted. --PresN 02:52, 3 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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This will be my seventh FLC relating to Music Bank chart. As always all comments are welcome. -- EN-Jungwon 15:42, 8 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your review on Last Week Tonight, happy to review this! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 15:04, 28 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The show was hosted by actor Choi Won-myeong and Lovelyz member Kei from June 15, 2018 until June 28, 2019. Actress Shin Ye-eun and Golden Child member Choi Bo-min were announced as new hosts the following week.- not supported in the prose (I think), needs a citation
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, since most cells have multiple citations.That's all I have, very good article already! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 15:04, 28 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Support: Great work! Chompy Ace 02:24, 15 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Promoted. --PresN 02:52, 3 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 12:25, 3 September 2023 (UTC) [23].[reply]
And here's the tropical/salsa equivalent to start off the new millennium on my lists! Erick (talk) 14:42, 14 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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to ref 2|url-access=
parameter.title="Tropical Airplay: Week of July 1, 2000
in ref 44 to title=Tropical Airplay: Week of July 15, 2000
title=Tropical Airplay: Week of November 4, 2000
in ref 61 to title=Tropical Airplay: Week of November 11, 2000
That's all. -- EN-Jungwon 10:22, 21 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Support --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 20:31, 18 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Magiciandude, all done, great job! MyCatIsAChonk (talk) (not me) (also not me) (still no) 22:11, 30 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed, promoted. --PresN 02:52, 3 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 12:25, 3 September 2023 (UTC) [24].[reply]
The 2022 Ballon d'Or was a ceremony held last year to recognise the best footballers of the previous season. Karim Benzema won the primary award with the article detailing all the nominees of every award category. The lists are FL standard because each category has a detailed blurb on each winner and their successes during the season, all the tables are complete with every nominee and they're all cited with reliable and archived references. Idiosincrático (talk) 03:25, 28 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
— RunningTiger123 (talk) 18:01, 28 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I made a few changes in places where I wasn't clear about the issue and am good to support now. RunningTiger123 (talk) 19:42, 29 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
That's all I have from my readthrough EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 16:54, 25 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Support – EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 17:45, 26 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Source review – The references appear reliable enough and the link-checker tool shows no issues. There are a couple of small formatting tweaks that could stand to be made, though:
Since it was just minor formatting issues in the source review, just did it myself to knock this off the list. Promoted. --PresN 02:52, 3 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]