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Dear Peer Reviewer,

Over the past few months this article has undergone significant expansion and, hopefully, improvement. I believe it has become a reasonably comprehensive, high-level summary on the topic of atoms. The article is still in need of references in a few sections and I am working to address that concern. My hope is that lay readers will find this an approachable article on the topic that doesn't require a degree in physics. It would be greatly appreciated if you could spend a few minutes reviewing the article and seeing what needs to be improved. I'm especially interested in knowing about parts of the article that may need a better explanation, as well as any other topics you believe should be covered. (Note that the article does not cover the topic of elements in great detail, as these are the focus of the chemical element article.)

Thank you!—RJH (talk) 20:07, 9 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]