Wikipedia:Peer review/Michael Jackson/archive5

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Hey, it's been quite a few months since this article passed FAC and I would like to keep it as good as possible. In this peer review I would like advise on prose, grammar, punctuation, MoS and citation formatting only. Any other issues can be dealt with on the regular article talk page. The 2008-present section should definitely be checked since it did not exist at the time of the original review.

Thanks, — R2 22:51, 30 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]