All looks OK to me. We are, of course, not doing any big announcements until we have charitable status, which takes somewhere between now and whenever - David Gerard 10:39, 21 February 2006 (UTC)
Hi. The second paragraph might give an incorrect impression as "the chapter still needs to go through the process of getting registered as a charity. Once this is done ..." as, in fact, receiving Charitable status is not a "done deal" and whilst we are very hopeful we should not assume it will happen. Similarly "not just serve as a conduit for funds to the Wikimedia Foundation" is something that we would specifically not be permitted to do under UK law. Could I suggest an alternative wording therefore along the lines of